Memories N Motion
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- bm150280
Memories N Motion
Just recently got a website put together and online. Let me know what you think!!
http://www.memoriesnmotiononline.com/
http://www.memoriesnmotiononline.com/
Re: Memories N Motion
be careful that is a trademarked phrase
http://tess2.uspto.gov/bin/showfield?f=doc&state=4003:tj29s4.2.2
you could end up getting in hot water with the name
Walker
http://tess2.uspto.gov/bin/showfield?f=doc&state=4003:tj29s4.2.2
you could end up getting in hot water with the name
Walker
- caganaudie
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Re: Memories N Motion
Like you site ... looks good
1. Your page for Company Profile is not working.
2. Curious, are you part of the Memories N Motion franchise?
IMA
1. Your page for Company Profile is not working.
2. Curious, are you part of the Memories N Motion franchise?
IMA
Re: Memories N Motion
I usually am not a fan of using black backgrounds on a website because I think it makes text harder to read, but your colors work very well.
Go back & check out your contact page. It still has directions that are supposed to be for your eyes only in setting up the contact form. I'm talking about the top portion of the contact form that SHOULD contain information for the site visitor.
And, from my experience in doing websites over the years, I think you will find having a demo video before even entering your site will turn away more visitors than attract them. Case in point, when I went to view your site, the opening/homepage video kept freezing up as it was spooling. If I were a paying customer, I probably would not wait... more than likely I'd click away from the page. Just my 2 cents.... others may feel differently.
- Diana
Go back & check out your contact page. It still has directions that are supposed to be for your eyes only in setting up the contact form. I'm talking about the top portion of the contact form that SHOULD contain information for the site visitor.
And, from my experience in doing websites over the years, I think you will find having a demo video before even entering your site will turn away more visitors than attract them. Case in point, when I went to view your site, the opening/homepage video kept freezing up as it was spooling. If I were a paying customer, I probably would not wait... more than likely I'd click away from the page. Just my 2 cents.... others may feel differently.
- Diana
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Aspire to inspire before you expire.
Re: Memories N Motion
I like the layout. Easy to read.
I did notice a couple of minor things when reading it over:
HomePage -- Last sentence We (not e)
Portfolio -- 2nd sentence -- These videos have been (not has)
Services & Pricing -- Your package (not you package) -- then at the bottom of the page -- to (not too)
Best wishes with your new adventure!
Sam
I did notice a couple of minor things when reading it over:
HomePage -- Last sentence We (not e)
Portfolio -- 2nd sentence -- These videos have been (not has)
Services & Pricing -- Your package (not you package) -- then at the bottom of the page -- to (not too)
Best wishes with your new adventure!
Sam
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