Memories N Motion

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bm150280

Memories N Motion

Postby bm150280 » Tue Oct 13, 2009 8:36 pm

Just recently got a website put together and online. Let me know what you think!!

http://www.memoriesnmotiononline.com/

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Re: Memories N Motion

Postby wmcgraw » Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:49 am

be careful that is a trademarked phrase

http://tess2.uspto.gov/bin/showfield?f=doc&state=4003:tj29s4.2.2

you could end up getting in hot water with the name


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Re: Memories N Motion

Postby caganaudie » Wed Oct 14, 2009 9:49 am

Like you site ... looks good
1. Your page for Company Profile is not working.
2. Curious, are you part of the Memories N Motion franchise?

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Re: Memories N Motion

Postby dilyla » Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:27 am

I usually am not a fan of using black backgrounds on a website because I think it makes text harder to read, but your colors work very well.

Go back & check out your contact page. It still has directions that are supposed to be for your eyes only in setting up the contact form. :D I'm talking about the top portion of the contact form that SHOULD contain information for the site visitor.

And, from my experience in doing websites over the years, I think you will find having a demo video before even entering your site will turn away more visitors than attract them. Case in point, when I went to view your site, the opening/homepage video kept freezing up as it was spooling. If I were a paying customer, I probably would not wait... more than likely I'd click away from the page. Just my 2 cents.... others may feel differently. :D

- Diana
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Re: Memories N Motion

Postby SamanthaB » Wed Oct 14, 2009 4:15 pm

I like the layout. Easy to read.

I did notice a couple of minor things when reading it over:

HomePage -- Last sentence We (not e)
Portfolio -- 2nd sentence -- These videos have been (not has)
Services & Pricing -- Your package (not you package) -- then at the bottom of the page -- to (not too)

Best wishes with your new adventure!

Sam

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