Brian,
Wonderful slideshow. nice job. Exactly the right speed, it gives me the opportunity to read the text well. (Dutch ...
Nicely chosen font. and a subject to my heart. creativity 10 points.
If I have to mention a minus; perhaps a little bit shorter in time and make the difficult choice to delete something.
All nice pictures but you can not post them all
, with the texts a bit to much and leave something for part two
Greetings from Holland ! Good luck with the Citizen mission.