James and Cheyenne in Alaska
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James and Cheyenne in Alaska
Our granddaughter recently spent 6 weeks in Anchorage, Alaska, on a pharmacy rotation from WVU, and this is a slide show of one of her weekends there. It happened to be her birthday and her boyfriend flew up to help her celebrate it. I couldn't find any music that really suited "Alaska," so I used "The Gate of Heaven" which is one of the music selections provided by Photodex. I want this to be something Cheyenne can keep as a special memory of her time spent in Alaska, so any suggestions as to how to make it better would be greatly appreciated. If you don't like it, please let me know why. It is 6 minutes and 24 seconds long and doesn't have anything bad in it--just a lot of scenery and two young people enjoying it. I have two other shows to make--one of all the things she and her roommates experienced and one of the weekend her dad flew up because she was having too much fun and he wanted to join in. I want both of these to also be special, so please give me some suggestions....
http://www.photodex.com/share/ptingler/269awmg4
http://www.photodex.com/share/ptingler/269awmg4
Re: James and Cheyenne in Alaska
It was nice, but I had mixed feelings about it. Hard to exactly say, but my impression was that was not the right music - I think it needed to be more dynamic and I think you had too many different transitions in there. Just my impression.
mikey
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Re: James and Cheyenne in Alaska
These are my comments;
The captions are too large and static. The 'we were here' should be turned into a caption as well.
I think that a black background does not suit this show. I would change it to something closer to white.
When zooming in (T=50s), consider starting with the photo already filling the frame and a rotation of -50, then zoom in a rotate to 0.
t=1:22 the background competes with the photo. Consider blurring it.
At 2:58, the black on the left is begging for a missing picture which continues to flow to the food star.
Clone out the ceiling light at T=3:10.
Quite honestly, I initially thought that I would not continue watching it to the end but I did. Sure, it can be better but all it needs is some polish.
This is one of the rarest times where i disagree with Mikey. I liked the music and it will not age.
If you ever get to tweak this show, I would love to see it.
pd
The captions are too large and static. The 'we were here' should be turned into a caption as well.
I think that a black background does not suit this show. I would change it to something closer to white.
When zooming in (T=50s), consider starting with the photo already filling the frame and a rotation of -50, then zoom in a rotate to 0.
t=1:22 the background competes with the photo. Consider blurring it.
At 2:58, the black on the left is begging for a missing picture which continues to flow to the food star.
Clone out the ceiling light at T=3:10.
Quite honestly, I initially thought that I would not continue watching it to the end but I did. Sure, it can be better but all it needs is some polish.
This is one of the rarest times where i disagree with Mikey. I liked the music and it will not age.
If you ever get to tweak this show, I would love to see it.
pd
regards.
pd
pd
Re: James and Cheyenne in Alaska
I liked the show. Liked the music too. It had a certain light hearted quality that I liked. The show wasn't about Alaska as much as it was about Cheyenne and James romping through Alaska. So the music suited them more than it did the location. They were obviously having fun when they weren't being chased by grizzly bears and moose . . . . . . . . . . mooses?
Overall, maybe a few transitions could be tweaked, but only if you want to spend more time on it.
Joe
Overall, maybe a few transitions could be tweaked, but only if you want to spend more time on it.
Joe
Re: James and Cheyenne in Alaska
I couldn't figure out how to answer each of you, so I will answer all of you at once: Thank you so much for the constructive comments. I am going to work on this some more and use the suggestions you have given--except for the one about the "you are here." I didn't like it much either, but it was already on the picture Cheyenne sent me. My Photoshop skills aren't the greatest, so I thought it better to leave it than to mess it up. lol I appreciate you all taking your time to watch it and to comment. When I repost it, I hope you will watch it and see if it is better. Thanks again for your help.
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