I think the font you used is fine.
Your kerning is really inconsistent from slide to slide and I think the font size is too large in proportion to the photos. It seems to be a very common thing to make the font size too big. You could probably reduce the size by 1/3. You might also try doing a left justify on the text (if you're using a text box, which you should be) and bring it down to the bottom so the last line of text is in the same location regardless of how many lines of text you use. For those places where the video/photo takes up the whole screen (ex; 2:51) I would still move the text down and to one side, then left or right justify depending on where you place it.
There were several spots where the text even overlapped the photo, at 5:59 and 6:25. It's very hard to read the website credits at 6:25. Maybe just bring it down below the photo so you can adjust the kerning.
Great story, well told, and very well illustrated.
I wasn't so thrilled with that frame and background & swirls, for this show, but, that's just a matter of personal taste, I guess.
The font that you chose is fine. Just a bit too big, as Joe said.
Thank you for posting this. I really enjoyed it.
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