Birthday Surprise

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Birthday Surprise

Postby LEE7 » Fri Mar 28, 2014 1:07 pm

Hi Everybody.

Not posted on here for a loooooong time.

Been busy, mainly doing video work, and looking after My better half

Went to an 80 year old friends tandem sky dive last Sunday, these are Her pictures taken by the site.

This slideshow is a surprise for Her, just simple crossfades etc set to music.

Regards.

Peter.

PS missed you guys.


http://www.photodex.com/share/lee7/6mgcpmg4

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Re: Birthday Surprise

Postby Betty » Fri Mar 28, 2014 3:56 pm

Pat will be pleasantly surprised to receive this beautiful video for her birthday. It actually brought a tear of joy to me.

Great job and the music went very well.

Regards,
Betty

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Re: Birthday Surprise

Postby debngar » Fri Mar 28, 2014 6:40 pm

Hi Peter,

Pat is way braver than I am! She'll love it. Nice choice of song.

If you are up to making corrections, currently her name is spelled out as "Pat,s" with a comma on the opening menu screen and at end caption at 4:08. You might want to change the comma to an apostrophe to make it possessive, (so it reads as "Pat's") instead. Also the contraction "dont" needs an apostrophe (so it reads as "don't") at 1:47 min.

The rest looked fine, told a good story of the jump and the slide show is something nice to have for a remembrance of that feat celebrating her special day.
Debbie
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Re: Birthday Surprise

Postby trulytango » Sat Mar 29, 2014 12:57 am

Wow! Brave lady... never in a million years could I do that!

Great pictures and show, she'll love it. Just fix those typos outlined by Debbie and it'll be perfect.

Regards

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Re: Birthday Surprise

Postby LEE7 » Sat Mar 29, 2014 1:40 am

Hi

Guess who always gets the apostrophes wrong ?

Thanks for the nice comments.

Surprised She went up, its was a very cold blustery day, We went three weeks before to video her but its was

called off due to the weather, got some good video that day though.

Peter.

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Re: Birthday Surprise

Postby moehler » Sat Mar 29, 2014 5:47 am

If you have video of an interview with her after the jump when she is all hopped up on adrenaline, it would make a really nice bookend to the show.

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Re: Birthday Surprise

Postby LEE7 » Sat Mar 29, 2014 6:25 am

Hi.

Good idea.

Got one at the end of the official dvd plus one by me.

Gonna sort them out.

Regards.

Peter.

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