Welcome to the forum Svetlana.
I'm finding it a bit difficult to comment on this slideshow.
My overall impression is it's pretty kiddies show that will appeal to the little ones.
Is this your photography? I'm missing some smiles from these children.
I'll agree with DanMac that there is to much movement including the animated backgrounds.
I've since discovered that this is your style of slideshow production and there is nothing wrong with that.
We all have different tastes, likes and dislikes.
By being a member of Proshow Enthusiasts you will gain a lot of ideas including feedback:
don't let comments dishearten you.
I too would like to see more from your part of this world.
Bill