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Re: Nature

Postby G_OReilly » Wed Feb 11, 2009 9:02 am

Dale

First let me thank you for looking at the show.

I am relatively new to Proshow Gold and do appreciate your comments.This is one way of having a second pair of eyes and ears so to speak.You mentioned that the pictures are "static" does this mean that I should use more "transitions" etc. as some one mentioned in one of my other shows that I used to many :)

I'm having trouble with syn, the music with the slides as the "Instuction book" does not explain it to well,but its probably me not being able to grasp the concept :lol:

Anyway Dale I do appreciate your input and will try to follow some of your instructions.

George :)
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Re: Nature

Postby Mokummer » Wed Jun 24, 2009 5:36 pm

Hi George.

Being new to this board I’m slowly having a peek around.

Having a photographic background I can see your eye for detail.
This is a beautiful presentation; love to see more of this. :!:

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Re: Nature

Postby JJVM » Thu Jun 25, 2009 10:24 am

Great photographs and presentation...

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Re: Nature

Postby g.vandeusen » Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:25 pm

Beautiful photography and soundtrack. Perhaps I'm quibbling, but a few thoughts. I would consider more motion in the photographs, however subtle. Only one or two had motion, and I wasn't sure why they did and the others didn't. Also, I would shorten up the text slides since they can be read in only a moment or two. Last, I might end on a slide that wasn't a fly, which is a bit jarring. Also, sometimes I extend the fade to black on the final slide and then have the last few seconds of the soundtrack play over the black slide, perhaps with your name, camera type, you know. Great show!

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Re: Nature

Postby G_OReilly » Mon Aug 17, 2009 4:07 pm

Mokummer: Thank you for looking at my show glad that you like it.

JJVM: Thank you for your comments I really appreciate them.

g.vandeusen :Thank you ... One of my other shows I seemed to have put in to much motion :) so I made this show with less. I agree with you about the text though.Yes the fly was kind of a shocker,perhaps a flower or something else might have been better.
Anyway thanks for looking !!!

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Re: Nature

Postby Astra » Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:13 pm

George,
you have a great eye for scenery and also for details shots.
Beatifull photographs - so fresh, juicy colors and full of positive energy.

Nice flow of the story,
but I have to agree with others before me - gentle movement of zooms, rotation or pans
will enhance viewing pleasure - as will do little different blending of the music.

And if I may - slightly disharmonius was starting "Menu" with two extra Captions: "Untitled Proshow 1" & "Loop all"

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Re: Nature

Postby sierra springs » Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:17 am

Beautiful photography and the music fits the show nicely. My only constructive criticism would be to end the show a little differently. It didn't seem like the show was wrapped up. Nicely done, though.

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Re: Nature

Postby climax » Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:45 pm

George,
Wonderful pictures, Lovely show. But I also think that you should choose a nicer picture for the end.
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Re: Nature

Postby G_OReilly » Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:48 pm

Alexandra,Karen,Cristina....

Thank you for takeing the time to look at my show.
I appreciate your comments and looking forward to making
another show.Just been busy taken photographs :)

George
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Re: Nature

Postby Tripodman » Tue Sep 22, 2009 7:57 pm

Nice show, I really liked both the pace and music. It's clear you have a passion for both nature and photography. Please show more! I was left hanging at the end though...
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Re: Nature

Postby Bob R » Mon Oct 05, 2009 10:42 am

Hi George,

Great photos. Relaxing show. You sure have the close-up photography thing down... You've gotten some good comments on how to make things a little better. The only thing I can add to the comments already made is: though I was appreciative of the technical quality of the slides with the insects at the end, they did seem a bit jarring to the overall tranquility of the show. A minor thing, but you might try moving those photos to other places in the show just to split them up.

I'll be interested to see more of your work.

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Re: Nature

Postby G_OReilly » Thu Oct 15, 2009 3:55 pm

Bob:

Thank you for taking the time to review my show.
I have taken note of what you have said and will
try to follow yours as well as others the comments
that they have said.

George :)
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