Another maternity show

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Another maternity show

Postby DALIA » Sat Sep 01, 2007 5:49 am

Let me know what should you change in this slide show, thanks.
http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewsho ... =2868907&a


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http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewsho ... alb=123789
I DID CHANGE SOMETHING
these all cards from baby shower , thats why i use all of them.
thanks everybody.
Last edited by DALIA on Sat Sep 01, 2007 11:58 am, edited 2 times in total.

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Postby Brenda » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:05 am

Hi Dalia,

An excellent show and 'photos. I liked the way you faded in/out on your images and the backgrounds you used for the 'photos were great. The only part I didn't care for was at the end, I thought the timing on the white slide was too
long before you faded into the last slide.

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Postby Jerry Cole » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:40 am

Hi Dalia,
Very nicely done. The tone and pace of the slides is just right for this subject matter. Can almost feel the anticipation of the Mom-to-be. Music is a good match-up and the slow transitions work well. The photography is quite good and the props are very appropriate. Yeah, I agree about the white slide, but since it was white it was much less a problem than if were a very dark shade.

I'm a guy who likes car chases and explosions, so I think to get me to watch it all and enjoy it was a coup de guy!

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Postby 57Corvette » Sat Sep 01, 2007 8:25 am

Dalia,

Nice show with great photos ..........I think showing the cards three or four times might have been a little too much and the same for pencil drawings turning into photos. I might have used that effect a little less .. but that's just my way. Nice job.

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Postby nantory » Sat Sep 01, 2007 8:58 pm

Very nice show. I enjoy your shows and I love your music choices.

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