My first Wedding Show
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My first Wedding Show
A short 7 min show i am working on for my newly married friends. I would appreciate any comments / suggestions that would improve the final cut
http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewsho ... 0892&alb=0
http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewsho ... 0892&alb=0
- 57Corvette
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That looked like a very pretty place to get married .............. a few suggestions for you. On the slides where your photo is smaller than the background, you might try a drop shadow on the photo to help make it stand out. Also, you could try a color outline around the photo. On the background photos of the ocean ..... your horizon is not straight ..... making it appear as though everything tilting to the right. I would go back and straighten those so the horizon is level. I'm not sure what the audio file was ......... but maybe it has some meaning to the newly-weds.
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Thanks for the post and suggestions Bob. The setting for the wedding was a small fishing village in NL, Canada.
Ok-I'll go through it and concentrate on the smaller pics/background suggestions. I'm not sure what ocean background you are referring to as there are a few of them.
Do you mean the audio file towards the end? If so -yes it has a lot of meaning in our circle of friends, BUT I have looked and listened a hundred times and after each view I get the " should I or shouldn't I " keep it in. On the one hand I know most of the friend circle will get it while on the other maybe it detracts from the flow. Any thoughts?
Ok-I'll go through it and concentrate on the smaller pics/background suggestions. I'm not sure what ocean background you are referring to as there are a few of them.
Do you mean the audio file towards the end? If so -yes it has a lot of meaning in our circle of friends, BUT I have looked and listened a hundred times and after each view I get the " should I or shouldn't I " keep it in. On the one hand I know most of the friend circle will get it while on the other maybe it detracts from the flow. Any thoughts?
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Well ..... I wasn't sure why it was there. It didn't apply to the slide as I saw it. But again, if it makes sense to the bride and groom, then leave it in.
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Well..... went in to take a look and low and behold... "Content Removed".
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And now abideth faith, hope and love, these three; but the greatest of these is love.
Thanks again Bob. I had another look at it and used your suggestions and changed the ocean view slide. Here's the link to the remake and again I welcome your comments.
http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewsho ... 2524&alb=0
[quote]Well..... went in to take a look and low and behold... "Content Removed". [/quote]
Sorry about that alcain.Thanks to you also for your very constructive remarks about the first show I posted here and tried to keep it in mind while doing this one.
Cheers you guys.
http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewsho ... 2524&alb=0
[quote]Well..... went in to take a look and low and behold... "Content Removed". [/quote]
Sorry about that alcain.Thanks to you also for your very constructive remarks about the first show I posted here and tried to keep it in mind while doing this one.
Cheers you guys.
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