My first Wedding Show

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My first Wedding Show

Postby burntb4 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 11:36 am

A short 7 min show i am working on for my newly married friends. I would appreciate any comments / suggestions that would improve the final cut

http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewsho ... 0892&alb=0

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Postby 57Corvette » Mon Aug 13, 2007 12:04 pm

That looked like a very pretty place to get married .............. a few suggestions for you. On the slides where your photo is smaller than the background, you might try a drop shadow on the photo to help make it stand out. Also, you could try a color outline around the photo. On the background photos of the ocean ..... your horizon is not straight ..... making it appear as though everything tilting to the right. I would go back and straighten those so the horizon is level. I'm not sure what the audio file was ......... but maybe it has some meaning to the newly-weds.

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Postby burntb4 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 12:37 pm

Thanks for the post and suggestions Bob. The setting for the wedding was a small fishing village in NL, Canada.

Ok-I'll go through it and concentrate on the smaller pics/background suggestions. I'm not sure what ocean background you are referring to as there are a few of them.

Do you mean the audio file towards the end? If so -yes it has a lot of meaning in our circle of friends, BUT I have looked and listened a hundred times and after each view I get the " should I or shouldn't I " keep it in. On the one hand I know most of the friend circle will get it while on the other maybe it detracts from the flow. Any thoughts?

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Postby 57Corvette » Mon Aug 13, 2007 12:40 pm

Well ..... I wasn't sure why it was there. It didn't apply to the slide as I saw it. But again, if it makes sense to the bride and groom, then leave it in.

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Postby alcain » Tue Aug 14, 2007 11:46 am

Well..... went in to take a look and low and behold... "Content Removed".

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Postby burntb4 » Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:39 pm

Thanks again Bob. I had another look at it and used your suggestions and changed the ocean view slide. Here's the link to the remake and again I welcome your comments.

http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewsho ... 2524&alb=0


[quote]Well..... went in to take a look and low and behold... "Content Removed". [/quote]

Sorry about that alcain.Thanks to you also for your very constructive remarks about the first show I posted here and tried to keep it in mind while doing this one.

Cheers you guys.

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