My First Slide Show

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My First Slide Show

Postby EYElene » Fri Apr 19, 2013 10:52 am

I am an Art Director/Stylist/Designer.
This is a small example of my work featuring some hair styles done in various photo shoots.
The slide show is not nearly as good as so many of you talented Proshow users but I'm learning as fast as I can.
I will get better. It is 5 minutes and 16 seconds long.
Comments are welcome and appreciated!

http://vimeo.com/64395366

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Re: My First Slide Show

Postby EYElene » Fri Apr 19, 2013 10:53 am

Forgot to check notify me when a reply is posted.
I was told it was automatic but I don't get any replies if I don't check it.

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Re: My First Slide Show

Postby pixelpusher2010 » Tue Apr 23, 2013 12:19 pm

Well I must say your background shows through here . Nice work for your first show

I would catagorize your show as " Edgy " it moves right along and is aimed at your target audience.

There are a lot of variables involved in liking a show or not. there is the subject matter ( personally not too interested in hair styles ) yet the pace of the show and transitions kept me watching. there is the quality of the photography (good ) and the story line as well. I think you have a pretty good balance here

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Re: My First Slide Show

Postby EYElene » Tue Apr 23, 2013 1:17 pm

Thanks for your feedback!
I checked but didn't see a category for edgy.
That would make more sense though.

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Re: My First Slide Show

Postby pixelpusher2010 » Tue Apr 23, 2013 3:19 pm

There really are no categories. I guess I just put everything in boxes.

If you look at enough shows here you find a pattern I see them as :
Travel /vacation shows
Day trips
Wedding/ Graduation shows
Family events
Memorials
and I'm sure a few more types

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Re: My First Slide Show

Postby EYElene » Tue Apr 23, 2013 3:25 pm

Yes and I apparently don't fit into any of them lol.
I'm going to post it on You Tube. Maybe there will be a category for me there.
Doesn't hurt to put it on both sites.

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Re: My First Slide Show

Postby tomdavis » Tue May 21, 2013 8:42 am

Unusual show however the show fits your interest. I noticed good composition, photography, and background. Enjoyed the show. Keep posting!!!

Tom
WB6CKH

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