Sweet Caroline

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Sweet Caroline

Postby Papa » Wed Feb 02, 2011 2:52 pm

First show posted on this forum. Our youngest grandaughter, Caroline, was born in the beginning of this year.
Any comments and critiques will be welcome. There is no questionable material and the show lasts for about 4 min.
Thanks

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Re: Sweet Caroline

Postby MortenCopenhagen » Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:50 pm

Very nice - thanks for letting us see your work.

I appreciate how your editing follows the upbeat in the music (where Cat Stevens shouts loudly) the first time around. It could have slightly faster. But the second time the music goes upbeat your editing is not changing a lot.

What a nice and happy family. Thanks again.

All the best
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Re: Sweet Caroline

Postby Papa » Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:00 pm

Thanks Morten for your nice comment. Actually the singer is Neil Diamond.

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Re: Sweet Caroline

Postby BarbaraC » Thu Feb 03, 2011 3:34 pm

The triple "Thomsons" got me chuckling. Whoever thought up that particular set was thinking well.

I have to admit to not caring for Neil Diamond, but I sat here trying to think of any other song that could have been more perfect, but nothing at all came to mind. :D

I agree that the show could have more closely followed the rhythm of the music, but in the end, wee Caroline and her adoring subjects won the day. :D

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Re: Sweet Caroline

Postby Linda01 » Thu Feb 03, 2011 7:13 pm

Loved the show! I am still very new to Proshow (haven't completed my first show yet) and I get such inspiration from the wonderful shows posted here.
By the way, Caroline is beautiful!

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Re: Sweet Caroline

Postby Papa » Fri Feb 04, 2011 4:44 am

Hi Barbara and Linda.
Thanks so much for the encouraging comments.
Papa

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Re: Sweet Caroline

Postby Jerry Cole » Wed Feb 23, 2011 12:26 pm

Great Show with a lot of personal caring that comes through in the production. Lovely subjects, great family memories. Tee shirt concept is great. Loved both applications of that. A bit of the "Newbie" facination with the movement and multitude of transitions that ProShow can do. Sometimes more is less. Closer connection with the audio would be enhance the show, and perhaps a bit more consistency in selecting the transitions.

All things considered, a very nice video that wonderfully commemorates a special time for your special family. Well done, thanks for posting.
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