Fun At The Park - 2 min

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Fun At The Park - 2 min

Postby lindonalta » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:23 am

Beautiful fall day at the park with my son's family.

Still playing and trying to learn ..... is my quick series snaps with camera click "cheezy"?? I really wanted to incorporate this series of snaps somehow..... ideally I saw a show that had a series of stacked photos that flew off the stack one by one..... but don't know how they did it.

http://www.photodex.com/sharing/viewshow?fl=3155000

Comments on how to improve always appreciated as usual to this newbie.
Thanks for looking.
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Re: Fun At The Park - 2 min

Postby Barkingmad » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:45 am

A most enjoyable show! The children are adorable and quite clearly had a great time. No, I didn't find the quick series snaps and click cheesy. Thank you for sharing!
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Re: Fun At The Park - 2 min

Postby bellzerr » Mon Dec 14, 2009 4:31 pm

Cute kids. Great music choice. I liked it. That's for the tip on how to present portrait (vertical) photos with a themed background. I tend to forget that I can do something with the background besides black.
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Re: Fun At The Park - 2 min

Postby climax » Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:51 am

Your family is indeed very beautiful! The photography was great. Nice choice of music.
I also didn`t think that the clicks were cheezy. But I think you would have an even better result if you would use some very fast white slides in between the pics to simulate the flash of a camera in synchronization with the clicks.
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Re: Fun At The Park - 2 min

Postby SherryJB » Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:52 pm

What a sweet show. Your grandkids can keep you in slide shows for years to come!

To me the clicks were a cute addition. You could use a cut transition to make them go quicker, and Christina's idea about using white layers to simulate a flash would be a nice addition.

Overall, I liked the show.

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